When liberating from it’s weary load,
Black clouds form in the sky,
My eyes too get dark and wet,
As we together cry!
Pearls falling from the heaven,
Conceals my tears in the mist,
How could anyone notice?
As I coexist!
By : Yousuf A. Ajabshah
We Weep Together!
Ajabshah Diaries 
Thats truly beautiful! I believe your tears wont go unnoticed! The ones who care will 👍 :))
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Thank you Antra :))
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I hope the tears bring relief with them
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I’m sure they will :))
Thank you
Have a gud day! 👍
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It’s sad, touching, emotional but so very beautiful! I must say your writing skills are improving everyday. Keep writing! 🙂
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And you have changed the appearance of your blog? I like the fresh, new look! 🙂
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Thanks miss! And yeah… That old weird look of my blog… I just hated it! 😅. So I went for NEW change 😋👍
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Heart touching poem Yousuf. I liked your write ups. Thanks for liking my posts.
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Ohh welcome! :))
Have a gud day 🙂
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Thanks ,
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God Bless you dear friend.
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Thank u :))
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I liked the way you wrote. Really Beautiful. 🙂
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Thankk you :))
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Lovely poem! 😀😀
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Thanks for visiting :))
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My pleasure. You’ve a great blog out here! Glad to have come across yoir blog! 😀😁
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Thank you… It really do means alot! ☺️
Happy blogging 👍
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^_^
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Where is your “reblog” button?
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Oh yes that I had disabled before.. but now its available..
You can reblog it now :))
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Thanks!
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Thanks :))
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Very beautiful blog….thanks for your wonderful time and your marvelous likes 😊😊😊😊😊💐☺️👍🌹
Best wishes…👍
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You’re welcome :))
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welcome yusuf janaab.sure ,there is no diffrence between rain n tears when heart feel some things n then u feel as coexit.
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Hmm yea 🙂 thank you!
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welcome janaab.
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*feel some sad things.
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great blogging and thanks soo much to follow my blogging
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Welcome :))
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What a wonderful craft in words my blogging friend. Most emotive. I write fiction, or try to, so am no poet. That said I am following a few on here and am learning to appreciate their craft much more thanks to their posts. I hope you don’t mind me adding to your following 😊
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Thanks a lot Gary! :))
And ohh I love fiction…. I’m on my way to your blog 🙂
Thanks for following
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You are most welcome. My blog is suffering from a lack of confidence in the theme…it works on some levels, but I’ve just not hit the right one yet. Thanks for the return visit too 😊
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:))
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You a lovely way with words and your blog has a very nice appearance.
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Thanx for the visit
Happy blogging :))
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This is beautiful.
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Thanks Isabella :))
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Thanks again
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Unnoticed, perhaps
Still
It’s a way to persist 🍸
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I like your poetry, especially as it connects to the heart filled with wanderlust. Today’s post and poetry about the kiss could not be linked to your site. Any explanation?
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Thanks Peter :))
Yeah that poem was just a draft … I’ll recheck and post it today. Please do visit :))
Happy returns of the day
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